Thursday, January 20, 2011

9. Three

"Hello" Jack said first. "How are you this morning?" His eyes smile broadening.
She drew her hands in at that but replied, "I'm good thank you Jack how are you two?"
Minx sauntering over ran her fingers over Sammy's arm, shoulder then picked up her hand.
She showed the hand to Jack "Rat bite?" his eyes concerned now and darker. "How?"

"I was sleeping and woke with it biting into my hand." Sammy replied feeling her cheeks colour.
" I bashed it against the headstone to get it off." Jack's face rippled with confusion.
"You slept in the cemetery?" he paused "Why?" grim puzzlement on his face.
Sammy was feeling bad for Jack he looked pained. "I was tired and I fell asleep" she said.

Sammy noticed Jacks mood change. " So you were in his territory" You're lucky to be here.
Jack smiled held out his hand to Sammy, "Nice to meet you Sammy" she took his hand it was cool smooth and a firm gentle shake.
"It's good to meet you Jack and Minx" Sammy smiled she felt deeply happy right now.
Minx sat next to her and cuddled close, she smelt like the forest Sammy thought, nice.


Chapter 10 - MERGER

Chapter 8 - MET
Chapter 7 - FEAR
Chapter 6 - NEED
Chapter 5 - MAYA
Chapter 4 - THING
Chapter 3 - KNOW
Chapter 2 - STUM
Chapter 1 - MINX
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    Thanks Camelia for the happy ending. Or is there more to come. I do hope so.

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  2. CameliaJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:58 PM

    Hi Kane.

    Thank you for reading my work and for your kind words.

    I have not finished this story yet...
    Im trying to get my characters together in the right place at the right time.
    Organising an actual get together I think would be easier at times.

    I feel I go flat as I get into stories and Im trying to pick this one back up.
    There is so much more to come...

    My favourite scenes are the first three...
    There visuals are great I need to find that again.

    Thanks again for the comment and reading its wonderful to get feedback and share work.

    It's great to have you following me to, thank you.

    Catch you here or in the stream.

    Cheers!

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2011 at 8:27 AM

    I don't know the name of the book but I heard about it on radio New Zealand. A woman I think from Spain wrote a whole novel all in poetry, every word in its place. It took her ten years.
    So I guess there's no hurry. I don't have the patience, twitters enough for me. So good on ya, and keep going.

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  4. CameliaJanuary 27, 2011 at 9:35 PM

    Oh that is a work in progress ten years, wow!
    Thanks for that, I'm really enjoying this journey these characters and the way it is writing itself at the moment.
    Twitter is a dwindling interest at the moment. I find it takes a lot of energy and effort to keep in touch. =)

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